I'll start with a 5 and work my way through your score. I like the the set-up, (haunting and dark) but in every sky there is something flying, (I was waiting for some ravens or birds to fly, or at least one on the tree.) The sky is moving so the swing should be swaying, even a little. I loved the girl and her eyes, (the girl swaying, if the swing was, would tie together well). The ending for me would have him by the tire with the girls face(bloody eyes) in the center, like a tire swing portal. Then if you made part 2 he could be pulled through the center of the tire to somewhere... The music fit well, so I give you a 2...for cool idea and time for making it, and for the art work. I hope you make part 2. Good Luck....