I'll start with a 5 and work my way through your score. I like the the set-up, (haunting and dark) but in every sky there is something flying, (I was waiting for some ravens or birds to fly, or at least one on the tree.) The sky is moving so the swing should be swaying, even a little. I loved the girl and her eyes, (the girl swaying, if the swing was, would tie together well). The ending for me would have him by the tire with the girls face(bloody eyes) in the center, like a tire swing portal. Then if you made part 2 he could be pulled through the center of the tire to somewhere... The music fit well, so I give you a 2...for cool idea and time for making it, and for the art work. I hope you make part 2. Good Luck....
Thank you for your input I really needed it since I am still learning how to use flash as I have never done anything like this before. My only experience before this was taking one 2D flash animation course in community college in which I later dropped out off after one day.
I'm lighting my rock-lighter now, ~ WAY COOL!!!! I like where this is going! Heheheheeeee..... "Remember the animals," lol....
Way Cool Teaser...
Way Cool Game! Thanks for the free play.
That's amazing! You should make a comic book story with her... I would love to see it. Way Cool.
"Anytime you have a woman riding a plane, it's awesome!"
"WE NEED MORE RUDDER CAPTAIN, MORE RUDDER I SAY!"
It's just a little turbulence, hehe..Thank ya, man. I always liked the Korean Air giantess ads on their commercials, hehe.
That's Way Cool! I love gray and working with it, but damn, you control the color! Nice, Way Nice! Enough said!
Thank youvery much , it means a lot!
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